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Eheh Despite her wild nature of tigress, Zawadi looks more like a big laaazy kitty :3
She's sleeping...sssssh!
I really love how she came out ^^ Zawadi is one of my favourite characters ^^
I tried to improve my shading Hope I did it xD
Lineart done by hand, again xD
hope you like it! meow!
Art and Zawadi belong to me
She's sleeping...sssssh!
I really love how she came out ^^ Zawadi is one of my favourite characters ^^
I tried to improve my shading Hope I did it xD
Lineart done by hand, again xD
hope you like it! meow!
Art and Zawadi belong to me
Image size
3787x3225px 7.8 MB
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You asked for a critique, so here I am.
I already commented this piece but I didin't go into details.
So let's start from the overall view of the piece; there's a feeling of warmness in this piece that can be easily perceived by the watcher, the composition is really nice but some details like the shoes and the clouds seem too relevant, while all the attention in the piece should be gained by Zawadi. Also I don't like the symmetry of the background, it makes everything look more "fake", there shouldn't be two twin palm trees.
The idea for the pose is really nice and I love the peaceful look of the character. I might add that to make her look more natural you should have drawn her dangling leg a little more floded. Also the arm under the head looks a bit awkward: the position of the stripes contrasts with the postion of the hand.
The lineart came out really good (maybe it should have been a little more thin on the background).
I like the coloring especially on the tree in the foreground, the color on the grass however is unnecessary.
In the end I really like this piece but with some thought about details it could have been better.
P.S.
Excuse my awful grammar, I wanted to write this in english to see if people agree or not with my critique.
I'm not really going to give to anyone 5 stars.
~Mm38